I’ll start this thread to list all of the stuff I’m coming across on Punika. I’ve already missed a few but there are so many that I thought I’d start it now that I’m a third of the way through the MSQ.
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Missing “in”
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“a ne” should be “a new”
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It should be “This, , is the drawing…”
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We’re going to Tikatika Colony, I don’t know why this is worded like this. Maybe remove the ‘to’ and add a comma?
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Carla / Kala?
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This isn’t about “writing”, it should be something like “I will use it” (it’s talking about blowing a horn to transform into a member of the Mayhem Legion)
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“that who can”